你好我是齐文玉。20年专注于中高考英语教学。一个重视“授人以渔”，相信“真诚到永远”的英语老师。

我帮助很多学生在学业上有所成就。

每当看到他们最后以优异的成绩考上了自己理想的重点高中与名牌大学；或者本来对自己缺乏或丧失了学习自信的学生通过我的指导掌握了学习方法，激发了学习英语的兴趣与动力、最终取得理想的成绩。

这正是我热爱教学动力的源泉。

那么如何让自己的英语成绩获得进步呢？

这是我的有关高考英语读后续写高分技巧系列的第二篇文章，希望能给正在紧张准备高考的学生们以及其他年级的学生和朋友们一点启发和帮助。

一、读后续写高分技巧之二

把握核心：优化用词，表达方式务求丰富。

写作的基础是要有一定量的词汇的积累，所以准备迎接高考的每个学生必须要在尽量短的时间内完成写作常用好的词汇积累。

只有词汇丰富了，在写作的时候才能做到游刃有余，心中的画面才能尽量生动地呈现出来。

下面陆续从几个方面来解析如何进行生动地描述，以及选用何种类型符合要求的词汇和表达方式。

二、如何进行动作的描写：

1、哭：

He wept bitterly when it was time for us to leave.He could feel tears springing up behind his eyes but he was determined that he wouldn't allow them to appear. He stood silently, tears rolling/running/streaming down his cheeks/face, while the music was playing.

2、看：

He looked around the room without fully lifting his eyes up from the ground.As I picked a glance/look at the performer,I was astonished to see Jack.My father winkled his brow and gazed at me, confused and worried.

3、走：

She wandered aimlessly around the streets.As he slowly inched his way toward the crossroads, he finally saw the car accident that was blocking traffic.

4、笑：

I squeezed a smile trying to conceal my nervousness.It was such a good comedy that when it finished, he was still rowing with laughter.

5、坐：

He settled himself comfortably in his usual chair.She popped up to a sitting position and looked hastily around.

三、上期读后续写 1 范文与解析

1、原文大意

作者和姐姐年龄相差不多,儿时曾一起度过许多快乐的时光。然而,家庭的破裂分开了她们,使她们失去了联系。多年后,作者和姐姐在他乡邂逅了。

2、续写指导

Paragraph1的开头是"我后来问她怎么知道是我的“，由此可推测本段主要从姐姐认出作者的方式上入手。文章第一段的"She always said she loved my laughter and it's the most impressive sound for her”。以及倒数第二段的" I was laughing at something my friend just said"暗示了原因,因此本段可续写作者笑声的影响力,对家人的意义以及姐妹之间的寒暄等。

Paragraph2的开头是"从那时起,姐姐和我再也没有分开过",由此可知,本段续写主要从相遇后着手,作者和姐姐的邂逅,让姊妹情深再现,两人在一起生活,更加珍惜彼此等。

3、范文指导:

Paragraph 1:

I later asked how she'd known it was me. She said it was my laugh, the impressive and unforgettable sound. My laugh is not all that unusual, but I guess to a family member it's infectious. It hits her heart and resonates in her mind. I asked her what she was doing in New York, and she said she had come for an opera showing and was there for only a week. Neither of us has ever returned to New York, and both our visits were spontaneous trips planned just a week earlier.

Paragraph 2:

Since that time, my sister and I have never been separate. We both moved back to Wisconsin. We talked and joked daily like before. Many years have passed, and my sister and I are now both in our 50s. I see the chance of meeting as more of a lesson, a reminder not to lose touch with loved ones. After our sister-to-sister miracle, I don't plan to let that happen again. Also, I know the secret to connect each other.

四、读后续写写作训练 2

第二节(满分25分)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。

It was New Year's Eve. I was 15 and feeling sad because there was not enough money to buy the dress I wanted.We did the chores(家庭杂务 ）early that night, so I figured Dad wanted extra time for us to spend together. Instead,he dressed himself again and went outside. "Come on, Elizabeth, "he said."Dress yourself warmly.it 's cold out."

Outside, I became even more upset. Not only wasn't I getting the dress; now Dad was dragging me out in the cold. Whatever we were going to do wasn't going to be a quick job. I unwillingly climbed up beside Dad, the cold already biting me. We pulled in front of the woodshed(柴棚), and started loading wood. Finally, I asked,"dad, what are you doing? Have you been by Mrs. Clark's

lately?" he asked.

Mrs. Clark lived about two miles down the road from us. Her husband had passed away the year before, leaving her and three children to raise on her own.”Yeah," I said. "Why?"" I rode by just today,” Dad said. Little Jake was out digging around in the woodpile, trying to find a few pieces of wood. They're out of wood Elizabeth.

That was all he said. Dad then went to the smokehouse and took down a side of bacon, telling me to go load it. He returned carrying a large bag of flour over his right shoulder and a smaller bag of something in his left hand. "What's in the little bag?" I asked. "Shoes. They're out of shoes. I got the children a little candy too. It just wouldn't be New Year without some candy. I tried to think through what Dad was doing. We did have big woodpile, meat, and flour, so we could spare some, but

I knew we didn't have any money. Mrs. Clark had closer neighbors than us. Why was it our concern?

We unloaded the wood behind the Clarks' house and knocked on the door. It opened crack(缝隙), and fearful voice said, "Who is it?" James Cotton, ma'am, and my daughter, Elizabeth. Could we come in for a bit?"

Paragraph 1:

Mrs. Clark opened the door of the house where the three children were wrapped in a

blanket.

Paragraph 2:

I understood very well that Dad had given me a gift much greater than a dress.

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